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Viet Nam Nhat Bao, 4 thang 1 nam 2002

Ngoc Lan (muc Nho To Tam S)

Ong THIEM-LE

HOI:

Gi Co Ngoc-Lan. Nhan oc muc NTTS ma Co tra li cho Ong Man Nguyen hoi ve ai-c-Tuan, toi xin gop them mot vai chi-tiet nho, mong Co ng cho la "thay lay" nhe.

Mai-Nguyet ai-c-Tuan sinh nam 1907 va mat nam 1968. But hieu TchyA c pho-bien vi y ngha "Toi Chang Yeu Ai".

That s, but hieu TchyA ong at co ham y "Toi Ch Yeu Angele". Angele la phng-danh mot co am lai tuyet-sac Ha-Noi ma ong ta rat yeu. Ch A viet hoa cuoi but hieu tren trung vi ch au cua ten ngi ep ong yeu. Ch TchyA khong phai viet ch in hoan toan nh ong Man Nguyen ma ch ch au va ch cuoi viet hoa ma thoi. Ngoai ra ong con co ten t la Mai-Nguyet na.

Ngoai s-nghiep ma Co neu ra, TchyA con co dch bai th "Phong Kieu Da Bac" cua Trng-Ke ra quoc-ng nh sau:

"Qua keu trang xe tri sng
La chai cay ben oi sn Sau Mien
Han-san vang tieng chua-chien
Na em a mai en thuyen Co-To."

ong gop vai y-kien nho goi la "giai-thoai van-chng", mong Co ng cho la "thay lay" nhe!

AP:

Cam n Ong Thiem-Le a giup toi them tai-lieu ve nha van, nha th TchyA, nhat la y ngha cua but hieu "TchyA". Trong khi toi treo ton-ten la th cua Ong do toa bao fax qua e tra li Ong, th co anh ban gia cua toi en chi. To mo, anh oc la th cua Ong va von la mot ngi ... "Nho ay bung", Anh oc cho toi nguyen tac bai th ng "Phong-Kieu Da Bac" cua Trng-Ke:

Nguyet lac, o e, sng man thien
Giang phong ng hoa oi sau mien
Co-To thanh ngoai, Han-Sn t
Ban da chung thanh ao khach thuyen.

va Anh noi rang: TchyA ai-c-Tuan dch bai th nay khong hay bang ban dch di ay ma Anh ngh co the la cua Tan-a Nguyen-Khac-Hieu:

Trang tan, tieng qua keu sng
La chai cay anh con vng giac ho
Thuyen ai au ben Co-To
Na em vang tieng chuong chua Han-Sn.

Va cung co mot ban dch khac na ma Anh khong nh cua ai:

Sng m, qua guc anh trang phai
Cay ben sau m ngon la chai
Ngoai ngo Co-To chua, nui lanh
Na em chuong vong en thuyen ai.

Tha Ong Thiem Le. oc en ay, chac Ong khong ngh la toi ... lac e cau gop y cua Ong ve TchyA ai-c-Tuan, nhng tai v Ong a co long ghi lai cho oc-gia ban dch cua TchyA ve bai th "Phong Kieu Da Bac" cua Trng-Ke, nen co ngi mach cho nhng ban dch khac, tai sao toi lai khong ghi chep lai e oc-gia thng-thc va so sanh luon.

Ong ban gia cua toi cung ke cho toi nghe mot "giai-thoa van-chng" ve 4 cau th "Phong Kieu Da Bac" cua Trng-Ke nh sau: nha th Trng-Ke cheo thuyen dao chi tren ben Co-To gia canh trang thanh nc biec, th lam c 3 cau th trong 4 cau tren th b. Trng-Ke loay hoay mai, khong the lam c cau ket th 4. Con S Ong tru tr chua Han-Sn cung la mot nha th, em khuya thao thc khong ngu c nen thc day i dao ho sen. S Cu thay tri at mang mang, manh trang non mong-lung, huyen ao, sng bac m m, S Cu ben ng khau lam c 3 cau th:

S tam, s t nguyet mong lung
Ban t ngan cau, ban t cung,
Hot kien mach au phan lng oan

th cung b van luon. S Cu c ngam i ngam lai 3 cau, ma khong the lam c cau 4. Trong khi o, chu tieu cht thc giac, khong thay S Cu au, ben i tm va gap S Cu ang lam bam 3 cau th l d. Chu tieu hoi th c S Cu oc cho nghe 3 cau th o. Von co hon th, chu tieu nhn bong trang in di ay ho va an hien tren may, chu lien oc:

Ban tram thuy e, ban phu khong.
(Na chm ay nc, na cai tren khong)

S Cu mng qua, khen chu tieu: Hay qua! Hay qua! Roi cung chu tieu quay tr ve chua giong chuong chua. Khi tieng chuong ngan nga vang xa, nha th Trng-Ke ang ngoi am-chieu tren thuyen au ben Co-To nghe c, lien bng tnh, ngh ngay c cau th 4 cua bai th tren:

Ban da chung thanh ao khach thuyen
(Na em tieng chuong chua vang en khach i thuyen).

Va nh vay la ca hai bai th a c hoan tat mot cach tron ven. Rieng bai th "Phong Kieu Da Bac" cua Trng-Ke c xem nh mot trong nhng bai th ng hay nhat, xep ngang hang vi Bach-C-D, vi Vng-Duy.

Ong Thiem-Le a gi cho oc-gia Nho To Tam-S mot "giai-thoai van- chng" va toi cung xin ong gop mot giai-thoai na qua li ke cua anh ban vong-nien - e oc-gia NTTS thng-thc trong nhng ngay au nam dng-lch. Mot lan na, cam n Ong va xin Ong "vat" gium hai ch "thay-lay" i. Ai lai dam ngh quay ve Ong nh vay? Knh chao Ong.

***

VNNB, ngay 11 thang 1 nam 2002

Ngoc Lan

HOI:

Mot oc-gia an danh a gi en toa bao may cau th va dong ch ghi them tren muc Nho To Tam-S ngay th bay 02.01.2002 cua Ngoc-Lan tra li ong Thiem-Le nh sau:

"Xin lu y: "Bon ch "Hot kien mach au" trong bai ng Thi (toi quen ten tac-gia, nhng hnh nh cua Vng-Xng-Linh) nh sau:

Khue trung thieu phu bat tri sau
Xuan nhat ngng trang Thng-Thuy-Lau
Hot kien mach au dng lieu sac
Hoi giao phu te mch phong hau.


Va v oc-gia an danh a cho biet bon cau th cua S Cu chua Han Sn lam ra vi s "tiep tay" (theo giai-thoai) cua chu tieu snh th, do Ngoc- Lan chep lai trong th tra li Ong Thiem-Le nguyen van phai la:

S tam, s t nguyet mong lung
Ban t ngan cau, ban t cung
Nhat phien ngoc ho phan lng oan
Ban tram thuy e, ban phu khong


ma Ngoc-Lan a chep sai, e... "rau" cua Vng-Xng-Linh cam vao ... "cam" Trng-Ke, thanh ra cau th t b sai:

Hot kien mach au phan lng oan.

AP:

Tha v oc-gia an danh va Ong Thiem-Le.
Ngoc-Lan thanh that xin loi hai Ong v s sai sot cua bon cau th tren. Nguyen do la toi von dot ac ve ch Han, ch biet lom bom may ch thong dung ma ai cung biet, ai khai nh: gia la nha, quoc la nc, tien la trc, hau la sau, v...v... Cau th tren sai, v anh ban gia ma toi van ke ve bai th Phong Kieu Da Bac cua Trng-Ke a oc cho toi cung mot luc ca hai bai Phong Kieu Da Bac va Khue Oan (ung nh oc-gia an danh a viet) cua Vng-Xng-Linh. Trong luc voi vang, toi a s y viet cau no xo cau kia. Thanh that cam n v oc-gia an danh va xin loi Ong cung Ong Thiem-Le.

Nhan ay, nhan thay oc-gia NTTS hnh nh thch th ng va co le v bai th Phong Kieu Da Bac cua Trng-Ke qua hay, nen nhieu ngi ua nhau dch lai, nen toi a nh anh ban su-tam cho toi them mot so bai cua nhieu ngi dch khac nhau. Toi xin chep lai ay e quy v oc-gia cua NTTS cung thng-thc:

Nguyen van bai th Phong Kieu Da Bac va nguyen tac ch Han:

Nguyet lac o e sng man thien
Giang phong ng hoa oi sau mien
Co to thanh ngoai Han-Sn t
Da ban chung thanh ao khach thuyen.

Dch ngha:

Cau Phong, em neo thuyen

Trang lan, qua keu, sng ay tri
Cay phong ben song, anh en chai, trc giac ngu buon
Ngoai thanh Co To la chua Han Sn
Na em tieng chuong vong en thuyen khach

1/- Ban dch cua Tan a:

Trang ta, tieng qua keu sng
La chai cay anh sau vng giac ho
Thuyen ai au ben Co To
Na em vang tieng chuong chua Han Sn.

2/- Ban dch cua Tran-Trong-Kim:

Qua keu, trang lan, sng ri
La chai cay bai oi ngi nam co
Con thuyen au ben Co-To
Na em nghe tieng chuong chua Han-Sn.

3/- Ban dch cua Ngo-Tat-To:

Qua keu, sng toa trang lui
en chai vay ben oi ngi nam kho
Chua au tren nui Co-To
Tieng chuong a en ben o canh khuya.

4/- Ban dch cua Bui-Khanh-an:

*Trang lan sng m nghe tieng qua
La chai cay anh giac cha yen
Co-To ben mai Han-Sn t
em muon chuong ngan vang en thuyen.

5/- Ban dch cua Tran-Trong-San:

Qua keu, trang lan sng tri
Buon hiu giac ngu la chai ben phong
em Co-To vang tieng chuong
Chua Han-Sn en thuyen song Phong-Kieu.

6/- Bon bai th di ay la cua Hai-a:

* Bai dch 1 :

Tieng qua keu sng, bong nguyet m
Cau phong om la giac sau m
Han Sn khuat bai Co-To vang
em iem hoi chuong khach sng s.

* Bai dch 2:

Nguyet ta, qua lanh lot keu sng
Anh la cau phong vo mong thng
Ben vang Co-To thuyen le bong
Han-Sn ren r khach nghe chuong.

* Bai dch 3:

Trang lan, sng ay, tieng qua keu
Ben phong, anh la, giac u hiu
Co-To quanh que thuyen neo ben
Chuong o Han-Sn vang tieng eu.

* Bai dch 4:

Qua keu, trang lan, sng ay
Ben phong, la om, sau say giac ho
Han-Sn khuat ben Co-To
Na em thuyen khach than th nghe chuong.

7/- Hai bai dch di ay la cua Pham-Vu-Thnh (Sydney)

em Neo Ben Phong-Kieu

* Trang ta, qua ruc, tri ay sng
Cay im la om ngi nam suong
Co-To ben lang em gia na
Chua co Han-Sn vang tieng chuong.

* Trang ta qua ruc tri sng
Cay im la om nam suong hng h
Na em neo ben Co-To
Han-Sn vang tieng chuong chua buon tenh.

8/- Hai bai dch di ay la cua Vng-Uyen:

* Trang khuat, qua keu, tri phu sng
La chai ben nc coi sau vng
Co To em vang thuyen ai au
Tnh lang Han Sn vong tieng chuong.

* Trang tan, sng phu, qua keu
La chai, ben nc det theu mong sau
Co-To tnh mch em thau
Han-San chuong iem thuyen cau lang l.

9/- Ban dch cua Ngoc-An (Toky):

Qua keu, trang lan, sng mu
em nam khong ngu, cay ru la chai
Co-To au chiec thuyen ai
Na em vong tieng chuong dai Han-Sn.

10/- Ban dch cua Ngo-Van-Phu:

Qua keu, trang xe ngang au
La chai cay ben goi sau ngu m
Thuyen ai ngoai ben Co-To
Na em lanh tieng chuong chua Han San.

11/- Ban dch cua Nguyen-The-Nu:

Qua keu, trang lan, tri ay sng
Phong ben, la chai, sau mong vng
Chua ngoai, thanh To, tren nui lanh
Na em thuyen khach nam nghe chuong.

12/- Ban dch cua inh-Vu-Ngoc:

Qua keu, sng phu, trang thau
La chai, cay ben lang sau trong m
Co-To chua vang khuya m
Tieng chuong tm vieng khach th trong thuyen.

13/- Ban dch cua Le-Nguyen-Lu:

Sng m, qua giuc, anh trang phai
Cay ben sau m ngon la chai
Ngoai ngo Co-To chua nui lanh
Na em chuong vong ti thuyen ai.
(Ghi chu- Ban dch nay hom trc NTTS co ang ma noi la khong biet cua ai).

14/- Hai ban dch cua Ai-Cam:

* Qua keu, trang khuyet tren canh sng
om la hat hiu gia em trng
Co-To thuyen o sau in bong
Han-Sn chua vong tieng chuong ngan.

* Trang khuyet tren canh sng qua keu
La chai song quanh ben co lieu
Co-To thuyen au trong em vang
Chuong Han-Sn ong song u hiu.

15/- Ban dch cua Nguyen Khue:

Trang lan, qua keu, tri phu sng
La chai cay ben giac sau vng
Chua Han ngoai ai Co-To vang
Thuyen khach em khuya vang tieng chuong.

16/- Ban dch cua KD:

Tri sng, trang lan, qua keu luon
Ngu oi cau phong la ca buon
Thuyen au thanh To, chua nui lanh
Na em chuong nen tieng boong boong.

17/- Ban dch cua Nguyen-Ha:

Tieng nhan keu sng, nguyet cuoi tri
B phong sau hat la thon chai
Han- Sn chuong vang Co-To lai
Khuya khoat lay thuyen ong giac ai.

18/- Ban dch cua Nguyen-Hung-Lan:

Trang ta, qua goi sng len
B cay chai la oi ben giac sau
Chua Han-Sn gia em thau
Tieng chuong thanh ngoai a vao thuyen nhan.

Vi 19 bai th dch tren ay, chac cung u cho toi ta loi ve sai sot tren. Cam n hai Ong mot lan na; xin hai Ong va quy oc-gia tha loi cho.

Minh Quang posted February 4, 2002

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